Vacant my intelligence,
Slowly propels away.
An allusion of my stance,
In silence concealed and gone astray.
Judge me not,
Judge not what I say.
For lone is my core,
Lone no more, I pray.
In the obscurity of a hushed night,
I caught a glimpse of what could be.
A mere hopefulness,
Of existing with thee.
Enveloped but by your attendance,
Enclosed, but free.
I pine for affection,
Only you can give me.
This aching,
I feel but cannot touch.
This yearning,
I am content, but not that much.
Somewhere, in the cavernous pit of my heart,
Your silhouette I see,
But no, it is not such.
Embrace my hand,
Embrace it so…
No, I would not let go,
I swear to not let go.
The finale is upon us,
The hourglass goes dry,
This about this suggestion,
And I bid you goodnight.
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Frozen Frame
Slip into a frozen frame,
A caught moment in the film,
Memorizing the lines of your face,
Remembering the warmth of your breath,
Your hands in mine,
Our legs entwined,
A whisper goodnight,
Head resting on my shoulder,
Tucked snug under the covers,
Lips locked in endless wander,
A sigh and closed eyes,
We fall into our dreams,
And now the years have gone by,
The smiles have faded to tears,
Disagreement, discontent,
And emptiness on my end.
A caught moment in the film,
Memorizing the lines of your face,
Remembering the warmth of your breath,
Your hands in mine,
Our legs entwined,
A whisper goodnight,
Head resting on my shoulder,
Tucked snug under the covers,
Lips locked in endless wander,
A sigh and closed eyes,
We fall into our dreams,
And now the years have gone by,
The smiles have faded to tears,
Disagreement, discontent,
And emptiness on my end.
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Noises
Spilling
Over
Dripping
Screaming
Agitated
Shouting
Crying
Broken
Tears
Drip
Drop
Ripped
Apart
Blurred
Vision
Why?
How?
When?
Who?
What?
No
Yes
Maybe
Bitter
Cold
Hearted
Supreme
Being
Crushed
Lament
Silent
Scream
Scream
Scream
Shout
Shout
Shout
Grinding
Teeth
Sweaty
Palms
Nervous
Twitch
Bleeding
Swirling
Twirling
Spinning
Black
Out
Turn
Off
Noises
In
My
Head
Note**
Nathaniel is currently pursuing his degree in Writing and International Studies at Monash University, Malaysia. He is an aspiring writer, like many of us here at the Writing Hive and wanted to share some of his poems as a guide to other budding writers.
I chose to use these poems because they depict a different writing style than the others posted up here on the blog.
Feel free to discuss the use of literary tools in his poems in the comment thread below. Nathaniel welcomes constructive criticisms and evaluations. :)
Lots of love,
L.
Lots of love,
L.
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